The Mermaid’s Voice v 2 is Done!

I think this story is the one of mine that has gotten the most positive response from Critters yet. Yet, I still found plenty of things to improve – points to clarify, details to add.

Now I’m feeling really good about it as I send it off on submission. My goal was to keep it under 500 words so it would do well at Daily Science Fiction, and I’ve done that. Now to see if the editors like it.


  • Started September 19
  • Finished September 20
  • 496 words (162% v 1)

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