I got a bunch of comments from critters, half of which seemed to consist of “Describe the raths better!” So I worked on that, and putting in a bunch of things called emotions. The second half was overhauled a lot too, not because people thought it needed it, but because I had an idea that made it better.
I continue to feel really good about it. I’m going to do a polish, and then see what I can do with it.
- Started June 20
- Finished June 23
- 2,894 words (124% of v 2)
- 3 scenes (150% of v 2)