I’m not sure what took me so long with this draft. I thought it would be quick, and then I could send it to critters for feedback before the Writers of the Future deadline in December. Oh well.
I did have a lot of character relationship stuff and world stuff to flesh out. I like how it’s turning out, and my beta readers liked the concept. I want to go through and see how to emphasize the themes of forgiveness and trust, as well as make the sister relationship feel natural rather than forced. And I need a new title.
- Started November 9
- Finished December 13
- 6,501 words (123% the size of v 1)
- 6 scenes