Another quick draft! Yay! I’m especially glad, because I decided to change from past tense to present tense, and it is WEIRD. I made the change because I came up with the perfect beginning line, except it didn’t make sense in past tense. So I decided to try writing it all in present tense. It certainly brought up all the times I use “was” because changing that to “is” doesn’t sound right.
I still need to make a polishing pass on it, make sure that I got all the verbs changed, and then it’s off to Mormon Lit Blitz.
Next, I’ll be working on a longer story, so the next update will be in a couple weeks.
- Started May 5, 9:53 am
- Finished May 5, 10:45 am
- 574 words