Another quick write up. I didn’t change a ton to this story. Mostly just fleshed things out and clarified some things. I like how it’s shaping up, but I think I can work on making the beginning more intriguing instead of just setting the stage. I’ll also send it out to a couple more beta readers to get their opinions.
- Started May 3, 2:32 pm
- Finished May 3, 3:21 pm
- 653 words (130% the size of v 0)