With this draft, I meant to be focusing on developing the character arc. I’m not sure how well I did that. I did add in a fair amount of sensory detail, and shifted a couple scenes around (the beginning, and a couple of scenes at the end especially), so it’s improved in that regard, at least.
Now, this story needs a good polish and then I’ll see if I can top the honorable mention this story already got.
- Started March 1
- Finished March 30
- 9,947 words (115% the size of v 4.1)
- 8 scenes