Since I put a heavy revision on this story, I sent it through the writing group again. The feedback was largely positive. I only had a few small changes to make in order to satisfy their concerns.
I’m also glad that I got to put in some sensory detail I got from my trip to southern Utah at the beginning of the month. Beautiful scenery that doesn’t show up often in dragon stories. 🙂
I’m feeling really good about it, and am looking forward to sending it back out into the markets once I give it a good polish.
- Started July 21, 2015
- Finished July 23, 2015
- 2,636 words
- 103% the size of v 5
- Amount of Spanish: 6 words, 5 phrases.