Immortal Judgment v 2 is Done!

This draft involved tossing half the story and rebuilding it from scratch. The scenes I had before did not build much tension at all. My antagonist mostly faded into the background, and the climax was too much of a robotic logical battle.

And then halfway through this draft, I unearthed a new theme for the story – logic vs emotions. So I need to go back and reinforce that theme in the beginning of the story. Once I’ve done that, and filled out the scenes that I skimped on, I’ll send it back out to beta readers to find out how well I did in addressing the problems they found.


  • Started December 4, 2019
  • Finished January 16, 2020
  • 5,844 words (139% of v1)
  • 9 scenes (100% of v1. 4 deleted from v1)

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