Unstop the Wind v 3 is Done!

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Comments from my beta readers indicated that two scenes were boring and dragging down the story, and the opening, while cool, did not describe the glider and magic system well enough to understand how Palipa was flying. So this draft was a complete rehaul. I like the changes I made, but it still feels really rough. And time is running out for the deadline for submission. Ah well. I shall do what I can, and then when I get it back, look to see if it needs any further polish.


  • Started May 12
  • Finished May 24
  • 2,483 words (68% of v 2)
  • 6 scenes (1 more than v 2)

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