I’m on a roll with 3 finished drafts this week! (It helps that 2 were flash fiction) I got a lot of good comments from my beta readers on this story, so fixing it up mostly involved little things. The biggest thing was changing the ending so that it didn’t come out of nowhere, and didn’t shift into boring telling.
Some polishing left to do, and then to see what others think.
- Started April 28
- Finished April 29
- 872 words (103% the size of v 1)