I finished editing my cookbook, so I wanted to do a quick revision for “Changestone”. Upon rereading v 0, I found that the thing I needed to change the most was the fact that the voice was wooden. I was just telling what was happening without any personality or emotion. Hopefully I got that across this time. To increase interest, I also added in a bit of action. Because with all the mentioning of pumas I did, I had to have my narrator face off against one. 🙂
Now to see if this story makes sense to anybody else. 🙂
- Started: August 18, 2014 9:04 am
- Finished: August 18, 2014 1:14 pm
- Number of breaks to feed/clothe kids: at least 3
- 1,127 words
- 112% the size of v 0.